Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?

News: Be vigilant: Anticitoyens could be behind any corner.

Author Topic: I can write to!  (Read 2221 times)

Offline Bara

  • *
  • Posts: 10033
I can write to!
« on: October 05, 2007, 10:36:12 PM »
Yes...i do write. BUT, most of the time its fan fiction or something. Also, before you go "OMG! BARA WRITES! WTF?! |-|0|_Y (|24|O!!!!|)(_)|)33333333333333333!!!!!!!!!!(_)|33|2 |O\\/\\/|\|493!1 \\/\\/1|_|_ |3(_)|2Y Y0(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)~!!!" I am not really that good. Its some what a first perosn narrtive. deal with it.

Heres my first story. Its based on Fallen Earth. Hope you like it.

It all started when i came out. Back where i came from, we came out of the Pods as babies. 2 parents, they put there DNA, and boom, Babie. Sure, there was some mess ups here and there. Come on, after all, we arent exactly the best at Techongly. Look at me, 19 years after i was born, and i'm sitting in this underground hellhole, talking to you. So, back to the story. After i was born, i was allowed to do whatever i wanted until i was 7. Then, i was put to work, pulling up crabtraps in my dads fishing boat. 3 years later, i was working as a Laborer, digging, fitting it in, with 12 year olds, 15, 17, 20 and older peolpe. Woman, Men, Kids, heck, there was even a dog. Your problem thinking "Well, What the **** does this have to do with anything?" I'm getting to that. He came from the forests. I forgot what his name was, but there was some symbol that looked like 6 circles in it. He said he was a Tech or something. He told us of a place Beyond the moutians, a place miles from here. He said he was traveling for Years after becomeing lost. I saw his armour. It was dirty, but, if you punched it, you would cry. It was that hard. Now, i was from a littile fishing village, with wooden, Dirt and Tire walls to procet ourselves from other towns, and raiders. When he told us of the vast land, Screens that made pictures appear, Heck, get this, A machine that washed AND dryed clothes. When i first heard of it, i was detrmiend to go. Then, it happend. Raiders. Overpowerd out defenders, and took a few us kids captive. Then, they gave me a lighter. They must of knew my love of fire. I set the entire damn town alight. I ignored the pleas to stop, and kept on torching. When i stoped, the town was alight. Everybody was alight. Then, i relazied what i just did. I ran as fast as i could, running. Runnig from the bullets. Running from the Machine that shot fire. Running from the Cars. And i didnt stop running until i reached the farest i could run, and i was 5 towns away. There, at the age of 15, i tired to restart life. But, the mans story kept ringing thorugh my ears. I wanted to leave this Island. So, i looked around, getting ready, My orgnail plan was to drive, but then i found it. The Sky Machine. I read that book i found in it to learn how to fly. At the age of 17, i was ready to fly it. But, i needed money for gas. So, i had to wait a year to fly it. And when i did, i packed up my littile cohtes i had, some fuel, and flew off. And i kept of flying. I kept of flying until i ran out of the gas. I didnt know what to do, and i crashed. I stumbled away, and i flew. Men wearing masks draged my away underground. Then, everything went black. When i awoke, everything was stronge. There was some beeping shit, and this guy in a white robe. He gave me a pipe, some food, which i ate some advice, and saved his ass from a zombie thingy. I left, and i took 5 steps from the hellhole. Then, i noticed this collar. I tried ripping it off, and i went back to the guy, demdanig a explation. He said, i was now a clone. I was lucky to, my memories were intact from when i was cloned before. He said, i must have had it own from before. So, sasftied, i wanred out, into the shithole you guys call home. Well, i fell in with a group caleld the travlers, smuggling things, Scavening, and being hired to watch over certain places. Tahst my story. Now, hand me a cigarrte. I need a smoke.

(The end)
Bara, King of Spam, Slayer of Spelling, Vanquisher of Grammar.

Offline Gulliver

  • Data Dog
  • Citizen
  • *
  • Posts: 5284
  • Forsooth, do you grok my jive, me hearties?
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2007, 02:40:48 AM »
That should be "I can write too" you know.

Offline Bara

  • *
  • Posts: 10033
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2007, 11:52:55 AM »
read the disclaimer.
Bara, King of Spam, Slayer of Spelling, Vanquisher of Grammar.

Offline Union

  • *
  • Posts: 1522
  • Loyalty to Self, Liberty to All
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2007, 04:53:25 AM »
WHERE ARE THE PARAGRAPHS???
"Deception, Intelligence, Method, Execution, and Exploitation."


Offline Bara

  • *
  • Posts: 10033
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2007, 06:14:53 PM »
nowhere.

Alright, just a littile heads up, i might be doing a story based on Warhammer 40k.
Bara, King of Spam, Slayer of Spelling, Vanquisher of Grammar.

Offline St Oz

  • Sub-Commandante
  • Citizen-Delegate
  • *
  • Posts: 2158
  • www.something.com
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2007, 10:16:25 PM »
Can you do a story based on your own imagination that has no influence from anything else?

Fan Fic is often the lowest class of writing... like a serf or peasant...

Offline Bara

  • *
  • Posts: 10033
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2007, 10:19:04 PM »
Can you do a story based on your own imagination that has no influence from anything else?

Fan Fic is often the lowest class of writing... like a serf or peasant...

yes. i have made 0.
Bara, King of Spam, Slayer of Spelling, Vanquisher of Grammar.

Offline Templarios

  • *
  • Posts: 880
    • My Nation
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2007, 11:08:20 PM »
*Disclaimer*
In my above post, I did not intend to offend or upset anyone. If you were so, I deeply apologise.

Citzen since 08.10.07 ¦ Senator since 08.12.07 ¦ Second Speaker pro-Temp.

My Nations Stats  ¦ Standing Order - Views Only ¦ Knight's International Church Bank

Wiki Page

Offline Bara

  • *
  • Posts: 10033
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #8 on: December 11, 2007, 01:06:57 AM »
Quote
Yes...i do write. BUT, most of the time its fan fiction or something. Also, before you go "OMG! BARA WRITES! WTF?! |-|0|_Y (|24|O!!!!|)(_)|)33333333333333333!!!!!!!!!!(_)|33|2 |O\\/\\/|\|493!1 \\/\\/1|_|_ |3(_)|2Y Y0(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)(_)~!!!" I am not really that good. Its some what a first perosn narrtive. deal with it.
Bara, King of Spam, Slayer of Spelling, Vanquisher of Grammar.

Offline Space Raider

  • Head of the American Mafiya
  • *
  • Posts: 120
  • WARNING: When we raid, we are merciless.
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #9 on: April 21, 2008, 11:56:57 PM »
Wow! You can actually WRITE!!!
We keep our weapons super destructive, but they're never used unless our national security is threatened, our foreign trade blockaded, we are invaded, our planetary colonies invaded, or our capital is nuked.-President of The Most Powerful Nation In The World (TMPNITW), G-Day Rawlings-
:o
If there's a way in, there's a way out. The only circumstance where there's no escape is when you are targeted by ten snipers at the same time.-Mars Military General, Godrin Yawler
:panda:

Offline Bara

  • *
  • Posts: 10033
Re: I can write to!
« Reply #10 on: April 21, 2008, 11:58:45 PM »
no.

this...

is...

not...

writing..

THIS IS SPARTA!

*kicks ^ down a well*
Bara, King of Spam, Slayer of Spelling, Vanquisher of Grammar.