That was no haiku
five, seven, five syllables
make a true haiku
Considering that true haiku uses Japanese sound groups (or
on) in a single line, I go with:
In japanese, the rules for how to write Haiku are clear, and will not be discussed here. In foreign languages, there exist NO consensus in how to write Haiku-poems.
So I try to stick to seasonal elements and observations on humanity amongst nature.
Besides my syllable countered said it was right.
