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Title: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Corgi on June 23, 2011, 12:50:54 PM

Boat masts like vague trees
Everything is gray and fuzzy
Half Moon Bay five AM

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Eluvatar on June 23, 2011, 01:50:08 PM

That was no haiku
five, seven, five syllables
make a true haiku

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Wast on June 23, 2011, 06:30:44 PM

Ooooh... Haiku! Let me try:

Cactus stands outside
So majestic and prickly
That is what she said.

Sky obscured by smog
There is only emptiness
That is what she said

I am so hungry
I take a potato chip
and then I eat it

Minister of Lulz
is not so good at haiku
only daily polls

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Khem on June 23, 2011, 06:48:12 PM

Cthulhu so scary,
Mind breaking horror dooming,
Love crumbles screaming.


How was that?

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Corgi on June 23, 2011, 07:40:59 PM

Dark in Arkham's stacks
De Vermiis Mysteriis
lingers out of reach

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Corgi on June 23, 2011, 07:45:51 PM

Quote from: Eluvatar on June 23, 2011, 01:50:08 PM

That was no haiku
five, seven, five syllables
make a true haiku

Considering that true haiku uses Japanese sound groups (or on) in a single line, I go with:

Quote

In japanese, the rules for how to write Haiku are clear, and will not be discussed here. In foreign languages, there exist NO consensus in how to write Haiku-poems.

So I try to stick to seasonal elements and observations on humanity amongst nature.

Besides my syllable countered said it was right. :P

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Dajoh on June 23, 2011, 08:37:57 PM

Bulsu Dajoh cē
Mōl'si'n heh tiro
Ses niolpekō

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Chairman Steve on June 23, 2011, 11:44:21 PM

The CIA dog
Guy Kazama must be killed
I am CHAIRMAN STEVE

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Dajoh on June 23, 2011, 11:56:45 PM

I love your mother
Not like that, you creepy perv
She makes nice cookies

Title: Re: Boat masts like vague trees
Post by: Khem on June 24, 2011, 12:11:24 AM

she does so indeed,
her cookies poison your mind,
diabetic hell