I disagree with most of this amendment:
1. I agree with shorter term limits.
2. Office holding, specially by the Citizen-Sergeant, should not be like a stamp collection, the idea behind the Ecclesia is that it can govern itself, without executive offices, meanwhile we've done many, but all of them directly linked with Ecclesia, and I keep saying offices should be filled only in need, there should be the option of vacancy. Either way, I think it's against revolutionary principles that one person should portray many or more than one offices, and if it must, I feel the Sergeant one should continue to be barred, one should not be able to broker treaties that may result in military operations AND lead such military operations, seems to be a conflict of interests. Maybe be barred from being a diplomat or delegate if you wish, but I must rather the current approach.
3. I don't think there should be any form of approval or rejection to the militia. Any citizen should be able to participate. The militia should be participatory, not a list of military ranks and obligations.
4. I already expressed my disapproval of ranks or chains-of-command, and chains-of-command cannot be legislated if it is the Sergeant who delineates the ranks out of whim. He may not delegate ranks at all, ranks do not exist in our legislature, so they are atm term-delegated. Speaking of ranks that may or may not exist might create conflict when there is no ranks or applicable "chain-of-command". No, don't put ranks into legislation, just throw away all that crap because we don't really need it.