The law is unacceptable in its current state. It needs to be clarified and edited:
- There are several typos ('strand trial', 'then' in the last subsection).
- In the first clause, they is ambiguous (as written the pronoun could refer to the Citizen-Initiator).
- The specified days for trial and execution should refer to our Revolutionary calendar.
- Article 2 will be a nuisance to update when new elected positions are created. The Ecclesia, hypothetically, could refuse to update the law, thereby shielding new officials their proper fate. I think the scope should be expanded to include all elected officials. We can leave in the existing clause to ensure a consistent supply of heads to sate our revolutionary bloodlust.
- The words proven implies that innocence is a matter of truth, whereas it is in fact granted by the Ecclesia. This could be clarified.
- I don't see the need for a trial if the Citizen-Initiator fails to choose a citizen. Immediate beheading serves as a better deterrent.