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Author Topic: The Bank Robbery  (Read 9073 times)

Offline Xyrael

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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #45 on: August 27, 2007, 10:32:02 PM »
Jared pressed the gun harder to the girls head. "Fine, who's the manager, point him out to me. I'll shoot his testicles if he doesn't tell me where the floorplans are. I really want to see my kid, and some prissy girl isn't going to stop me. I don't give a damn if you're a temp or fucking Jesus, who's your boss?"
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #46 on: August 27, 2007, 10:36:18 PM »
"Listen lady. As my buddy said, we dont care if your a temp. Hell, we dont care if you even work here. All we want to know, Is where is the floor plans? And if you do know, and wont tell us, my buddy there will put a bullet in your brain."
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #47 on: August 27, 2007, 10:44:38 PM »
"Ok look, if your gong to shoot me, shoot me. But seriously today is a slow day the manager is off. It's me and a couple other employees. Don't shoot them either, they don't know. So you should just go turn yourselves in before you get thrown in jail and never see your kid. Oh and could you stop being so rude jeez." Maria knew this was a bold move but maybe she could talk some sense into the psychos before they killed someone.



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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #48 on: August 27, 2007, 10:56:33 PM »
Vinko, filled with rage, hit her in the head with the butt of his rifle. He did it several times, then stopped. The girl was crying. He looked down at her, then walked around to look at all the hostages. He picked out a another employee, and made him take him to the mangers office.

"Frank, watch over the hostages. if any of them give you trouble, kill them"

He walked down the hallways, following the employee.
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #49 on: August 27, 2007, 11:04:16 PM »
Jared looked down at the whimpering girl, her head was cut open and she was bleeding. He didn't know what to do as he watched his comrade go to the manager's office. He ran his finger along the cut, trying to wipe off the blood. "I'm sorry, miss..." he read he name tag. It was a white peice of paper with Maria scribbled on it. "Maria." She was struggling not to scream, so he put his gun in his pants and picked her up.

"Look, it'll be fine. We just need to get out of here, I really don't want anyone to die. Billy shot at some cops, so they aren't gonna let us go so quick. I really ain't lookin for a lead bullet implanted in my head, y'know?" he put her next to the wall and tended to her wounds a bit. "You remind me of my ex, all stubborn-like. I ain't never hit her though, so sorry about your head." He pat her gently, not sure what to say. He didn't want to terrorize these people, they had lives too. He looked back to the managers office while fiddling with his gun in his hand, a third member of the gang keeping a close watch on the entrance.
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #50 on: August 27, 2007, 11:08:35 PM »
Vinko walked back in.

" I found the floor plans. It turns out, we have two ways of getting out. The way we got in, or, we could knock down a wall and head into a alley way. Vinko light a cigarette. He looked at all the hostages. They seemed to be scared of him. He looked over at the person he just beat and walked over to her.

"Look, miss. I am really sorry. I just lost my temper. Growing up, moving from foster home to foster home gave me a lot of angry. I'm really sorry....Want a cigarette?"
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #51 on: August 27, 2007, 11:15:21 PM »
"Get the hell away from me. I do not want a ciggarette and your gonig to trigger the fire alarms asshole." Maria hssed at the man smoking. She turned to the less evil man. "Thanks I'm okay I just have a headache." She glared at "Vinko" and felt her cut. She cringed in pain. "Can I go to the bathroom and wash this off?" Maria wiped her eyes that were probably running with mascara adn stood up.



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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #52 on: August 27, 2007, 11:17:28 PM »
"Frank, go with her."

Odiac looked up and saw the smoke alarm. He fired a few rounds into it, to make sure it didnt go off. He walked around to each of the hostages, and talked to them. Most of them gave the same response Maria did.

Well....Jared is more popular..again
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #53 on: August 28, 2007, 12:12:33 AM »
Jared moved over to Maria, picking her up by the arm and forcing her gently to the ladies room. She entered, trying to close the door behind her, but he pushed it open. "Nuh uh. You're not getting out of my sight. You can use the stall, I'll wait inside."

Maria blushed a bit, and Jared leaned against the wall. "Do whatchya gotta do, I know you ladies always gotta take your time. Always wondered what you do in here besides--" he cut himself off. He didn't want to offend the girl anymore than he had. He kept the door open a crack as a precaution in case anyone busted it, but kept his eyes focused on the teller.
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #54 on: August 28, 2007, 12:18:40 AM »
"Oh come on what do you think I'm going to do? Punch through the wall and run away? See the window up there? Do you think i can fit through that? I didn't think so. Here I'll even give you my cell phone now can you please get out?" Maria reached into the pocket of her skirt and gave him the phone. "I don't want you peaking in on him." Maria teased the man hopefully he wouldn't get offened. She waited as he thought of what to do.



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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #55 on: August 28, 2007, 12:21:24 AM »
Vinko sat down at a desk, and put his gun on the desk.

My god, what am i doing?

He took out a picture from his pocket a smiled. It was his girlfriend and his son. He came here to rob the bank so Jared could get his kid back. They were going to split it 50-50, and Vinko was going to use the money so he and his family could move out from the bad neighbor he lives in. He looked over a a hostage, who kept looking at the chocolate bar he had. He threw it over to him, and he gobbled it down. Vinko smiled, and pulled open a drawer. He found a calender, and flipped threw it. He then threw it down on the ground. Tomorrow was the girls birthday that he hit.

"Oh god no...."
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #56 on: August 28, 2007, 12:23:50 AM »
Jared looked at the phone. He fumbled with it for a minute, then looked at Maria. "Nah, go about your business. I'll stay." He flipped open the cell and looked through the variety of pictures she had taken. For a 20 year old corporate slave she sure had a few exceptional pictures in here... Maria could see his devious smile and knew what he was doing. She tried reaching for it but he hopped away with a chuckle, "Hey, you're the one who gave it to me. Go primp yourself or something."
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #57 on: August 28, 2007, 12:27:01 AM »
Vinko walked over to jared, and he saw him looking at a phone.

"Man, we just did a very wrong thing. The chick in the bathroom, its her birthday tommorw"
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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #58 on: August 28, 2007, 12:36:11 AM »
"Yes it is my birthday tomorrow woohoo. I assume I will be out of here by then? If not I demand lots of alcohol and friends please. Oh and give me my phone." Maria snatched her phone from 'Frank's' grasp and put it back in her pocket. "There are pictures on there that you are not allowed to see. Are you underage mister? 17? That is not acceptable." Maria grinned as she teased the guy.



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Re: The Bank Robbery
« Reply #59 on: August 28, 2007, 12:38:36 AM »
"You got my buddy as a friend, and ill go make my homemade cocktail"
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