I think we need to come up with a term other than "elected official." I get why we're not including the Dean and the Editor, but to argue that they aren't elected officials seems off. Elected government official maybe?
Is 1.1 meant to keep elected officials from holding any of the appointed offices as well? For example, is it meant to keep the Citizen-Sergeant from serving as citizen-diplomat, or does it extend even further to keep them from serving as citizen-ambassadors, citizen-guides, etc.? We need to flesh that out a bit so we're clear on exactly what we mean to prevent.