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Origins of the Allied States of Bustos OOC
« on: December 05, 2014, 06:40:17 PM »
I am placing this in the Pre-Modern Era because it refers to the birth of the Allied States even though the class being taught is in Modern Era. 

And yes, it's history from the Allied States' perspective.   :-P
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos-21 OOC
« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2014, 10:02:26 PM »
Works for me, though if you like I can give some constructive criticism on the writing.
                                 
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos-21 OOC
« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2014, 11:12:32 PM »
Please do.  My creative writing skills suck.
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos-21 OOC
« Reply #3 on: December 21, 2014, 03:27:11 AM »
Can use the same OOC thread for Beginnings as well, since its basically the same time period, might push into the 1800s.  I'm looking to RP the smaller details of the Origins of the Allied States.
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos-21 OOC
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2014, 05:09:50 PM »
My wife and son are out of town for the next two weeks, visiting their side of the family in the South.  Aiming to flesh out my RP once a day.

Markus Woolfe, Thanks!   :drunks:
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos-21 OOC
« Reply #5 on: December 23, 2014, 09:56:06 PM »
Currently working on the Charter of the Allied States, known as the Charter of Rights.  It's going to be a straight rip off of the Bill of Rights, with some modifications to fit my vision for the Allied States.
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos-21 OOC
« Reply #6 on: December 27, 2014, 08:32:02 AM »
I have once again been enlightened by  :wb: Eluvatar. :hug:


Major revisions coming to the Beginnings thread.   :fro:
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Re: Origins of the Allied States of Bustos OOC
« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2014, 03:06:25 AM »
Can I get a mod/admin to change the year in the thread title to          The Beginnings (1780-1820)

Thanks in advance, I want to conclude with the death of Lord Christopher in 1820.


Revisions completed.
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