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Author Topic: Rough draft of executive officer law  (Read 1203 times)

Offline Lindisfarne

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Re: Rough draft of executive officer law
« Reply #15 on: June 25, 2016, 12:55:59 AM »
I second that move!
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Re: Rough draft of executive officer law
« Reply #16 on: June 29, 2016, 07:01:53 PM »
Here we go

Offline Khem

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Re: Rough draft of executive officer law
« Reply #17 on: July 24, 2016, 08:36:43 PM »
This has been moved to a vote HERE

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Re: Rough draft of executive officer law
« Reply #18 on: July 24, 2016, 08:46:56 PM »
One thing I missed earlier: Section 5 refers both to a "Directory" and an "Advisory Council" presumably as though they are one and the same. Presumably one or the other name is the one that should be used, not both.

I think we would need to note that we're repealing or amending some combination of the Advisory Council Act, Citizen-Initiator Act, Citizen-Liason Act, Delegacy Act, Ecclesia Procedure Act, and Citizen-Sergeant Act.

Also, Citizen-Sergeant is listed twice under 7.1.
                                 
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Re: Rough draft of executive officer law
« Reply #19 on: July 24, 2016, 09:13:51 PM »
Modified the mistakes. Told you my brain is foggy today :P

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